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[UMB animation shorts intro]

The faces of Mario and Luigi are a bit off when they are blinking in the title screen. Plus there is a lot of unused space up at the top through most of animation. It's a good start.

utramariobros responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

Yeah, I have an OCD problem so I tried fixing it and thats what I gotten, I'm making sure that im going to fix alot of things and use it all for adobe flash.

Funny part is I usually just create the frames in a photoshop program then imported it on sony vegas. Next time I'm going to see if you're able to do that in Adobe Flash. I wonder if any other animators do that.

[Stranger Neighbors]

Good stuff. The animations were nice and I always love it when animators add music at the end and then make it stop when you press the replay button.

LeffsHanid responds:

Thank you! It actually took me a little while to figure out how to make the music stop. But glad you enjoyed it guy!

[SMB:GT TGA - Ep 1]

I don't know why but when the movie finishes loading, I get a white screen of nothing.

[X vs. Sigma]

It was pretty good. One improvement would be to add a background layer to your buttons so that you don't need to click on the actual font to use it.

The-Cloaked-One responds:

Alright, sounds good! Most of my menus have rectangular buttons, I'm not sure why I set it just to text on this one. If I get around to updating this, I would want to add Zero at the beginning blowing the hole in the ground and an animation of X shooting the button when clicked.

[The next morning...Ninjas]

Needs Work.

Try checking the timeline in flash to time the sound effects a bit better near the end.

Brownish responds:

Thanks :O I had a bit of trouble figuring out how to do that. I remember doing it once before :S.

[Dreams Preview]

Could use some work.

The play button needs a square background; it is really hard to click on font text. Also, the drawn text and the way it is animated makes it hard to read. Instead of using hand drawn text, find a nice hand drawn style font and use it instead. Besides those two things, it seems that you are on your way to making a pretty nice flash for the portal.

t3hprinceofcats responds:

Thank you very much! I shall keep the text thing in mind! :)