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[UMB animation shorts intro]

The faces of Mario and Luigi are a bit off when they are blinking in the title screen. Plus there is a lot of unused space up at the top through most of animation. It's a good start.

utramariobros responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

Yeah, I have an OCD problem so I tried fixing it and thats what I gotten, I'm making sure that im going to fix alot of things and use it all for adobe flash.

Funny part is I usually just create the frames in a photoshop program then imported it on sony vegas. Next time I'm going to see if you're able to do that in Adobe Flash. I wonder if any other animators do that.

[Stranger Neighbors]

Good stuff. The animations were nice and I always love it when animators add music at the end and then make it stop when you press the replay button.

LeffsHanid responds:

Thank you! It actually took me a little while to figure out how to make the music stop. But glad you enjoyed it guy!

[X vs. Sigma]

It was pretty good. One improvement would be to add a background layer to your buttons so that you don't need to click on the actual font to use it.

The-Cloaked-One responds:

Alright, sounds good! Most of my menus have rectangular buttons, I'm not sure why I set it just to text on this one. If I get around to updating this, I would want to add Zero at the beginning blowing the hole in the ground and an animation of X shooting the button when clicked.

[The next morning...Ninjas]

Needs Work.

Try checking the timeline in flash to time the sound effects a bit better near the end.

Brownish responds:

Thanks :O I had a bit of trouble figuring out how to do that. I remember doing it once before :S.

[Dreams Preview]

Could use some work.

The play button needs a square background; it is really hard to click on font text. Also, the drawn text and the way it is animated makes it hard to read. Instead of using hand drawn text, find a nice hand drawn style font and use it instead. Besides those two things, it seems that you are on your way to making a pretty nice flash for the portal.

t3hprinceofcats responds:

Thank you very much! I shall keep the text thing in mind! :)

[Vehicular manslaughter V2]

It just stopped

You should always test your flash flims before posting them and thats control > test movie not just pressing enter.

mrpancake responds:

sorry to hear it lagged, but that might have been a preload problem. I always test with control enter. try to reload the animation it should work smoothly.

everything should be fine, the only thing I could think of is that there is no preloader (movie is 600+ kb

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 238]

What the hell?

Word of advice kid, put more effort into your flashes. No one like stuff that can me made in an hour and it ends up being noting but a still picture. Maybe if you added a story in the flash and made hitler do something then maybe it would be better, but all I saw was just a picture of a hitler doing nothing and JPop playing in the background.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Who you calling kid? I was doing my times tables before you were even conceived.